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کرو وعدہ میرے مرنے پر آؤ گے

Posted by Haris Gulzar on January 4, 2010

کرو  وعدہ  میرے  مرنے  پر  آؤ  گے

اور  مجھے  اپنے  ہاتھوں  سے  دفناؤ  گے


آؤ  گے  میری  میّت  پہ  اپنوں  کی  طرح

سامنے  دنیا  کے  آنسو  بھی  بہاؤ  گے


بتاؤ  گے  نہ  کسی  کو  ہماری  علیحدگی  کا

وہی  پرانا  پیار  دنیا  کو  دکھاؤ  گے


دو  گے  سب  سے  زیادہ  کاندھہ  مجھے

عمر  بھر  میرے  نام  سے  نہ  گھبراؤ  گے


چھوڑ  کر  زمانے  بھر  کی  خوشیاں  میرے  لیئے

اور  میرے  دل  سے  اپنا  غم  مٹاؤ  گے


روز  آیا  کرو  گے  میری  قبر  پر

اور  دعا  کے  لیئے  ہاتھ  بھی  اٹھاؤ  گے


کرو  وعدہ  میرے  مرنے  پر  آؤ  گے۔ ۔ ۔

20 Responses to “کرو وعدہ میرے مرنے پر آؤ گے”

  1. Intricate said

    Oh bhai.. itni depressing.. khairyat to hai?? khud likhi hai?
    It’s nice waisay.🙂 (Y)
    The title’s catching

  2. Assalamoalaikum Bhai, I have so much catching up to do with your blog!!

    Just dropped in to read the last entry. Hope you are fine and your family is well.🙂

  3. @Intricate: LOL😛. Nahi khud nahi likhi. A friend sent it to me and I liked it, so posted it here🙂. Kash khud kuch acha likh sakta…

    @Alhamdolillah: Its so good to see you back sister. You have been away for long now🙂. Alhamdulillah everyone is good. I’ll go back to Lahore in a couple of weeks Insha-Allah after my exams are over. Really need your prayers for my exams…

    Again, welcome to the blogosphere, and I’ll wait for your comments on my other posts🙂. I hope everythinhg is good at your end Insha-Allah. Take care

  4. Rambler said

    Haris I was impressed that you wrote it and that too sooooo well!!! till I read the Intricate and your comments!

    Anyways very (Y) but depressing too!

  5. t.s.c said

    oh bhai … kya ho gaya hai?

    Khudkushi na karein, apna masla ansaar burni welfare trust ko bataein😛

  6. @Rambler: That means I should have waited before telling that I didn’t write it myself😛. At least kuch tareef ho ho jati😀.

    @T.S.C: That means I have a shoulder to cry on😀. Hahaha… Welcome to Amar Bail and a great entry on my blog😀. Do keep visiting…

  7. That’s depressing but very well-written :[ I wish I could write poetry like that!

  8. Ali Adnan said

    yaar 2 baatain kehni hain sirf

    1. poetry k baad disclaimer kar dia kar k maine nahi likhi .. warna log thori der k liye hi sahi par tujhse impress ho jatay hain .. urdu shayari k saath yeh ziadti hai😛

    2. “kisi baat say main har roz dua karnay aaon ga ” .. pata hai petrol kitna mehnga hai !! CMP !

  9. Sabahat said

    I don’t like it :O

  10. @Closed Eyes: True that’s well written…

    @Ali Adnan:

    1) Jalnay walay ka moun brown😛.
    2) Yani ke ab petrol ko mujh pe foqiyat milay gi. Dost dost na raha… Main hukoomat-e-Irfan se guzarish kerta houn ke teri bike pe CNG ka baray wala cylinder lagwa de, saza ke tor pe😛. Dono ka faida ho jaye ga, tera bhi aur mera bhi😀

    @Sabahat: Waisay logoun ne dhakay chupay alfaaz main yehi kaha hai ke they don’t like it, but aap tou direct hi…😛. I didn’t know people would take it as depressing… I’ll try and post some happy poetry as well Insha-Allah🙂

  11. Ali Adnan said

    @Haris: mera pehlay hi brown hai .. is liye koi faida nahi😛

    lol @ hukoomat-e-irfan😀 … agar cng lag gai meri bike par to marnay par bhi nahi aa sakoon ga .. roz roz aana to door ki baat .. pata nahi hai k cng band hai

    aur tujhe to sirf dukhi shayari pasand hai .. kahan say laye ga happy poetry ? rehnay day … yeh teray say nahi ho ga😛

  12. Sabahat said

    @ Haris,

    Woh mene socha jab taareef direct karti hon tou buraayi bhi direct he kardoun😛

    Aur depressing ya happy poetry wala masla nahi . . mujhay yeh kuch ajeeb si lag rahi hai :O😀

  13. @Ali: Hahaha… waqayi nahi aaye ga na? Pakka bata? And happy poetry outsource ker doun ga, sasti parti hai😀. Waisay bhi dukhi poetry kisi ko samajh hi nahi aati😛

    @Sabahat: Aapka qusoor nahi hai, is model main poetry aisi hi aarahi hai😛

  14. No one can promise you to visit the grave everyday, but there could be one if you are fortunate… 🙂

  15. @CU: itna seriously nahi lena tha isay😛. It was just a poem, meray marnay ke baad tou mujhay pata bhi nahi lagay ga kon aaya aur kon nahi :-)…

  16. Dua said

    It a nice poem – yeah depressing but written with emotions. We never know what’s gonna happen after when we’re gone, but one thing is for sure gradually people return to their busy “race” of life.🙂 But nice piece of poetry, that it is.

  17. @Dua: Welcome to Amar Bail. You’re right, people come and people go, but live never stops. It goes on…

  18. Shahrukh said

    @Haris: You may be at Lahore and there’s probability that i am not informed of your death even if am alive that time,so no promise on it🙂 …

  19. jia arshad said

    reminds dat we r “musafir” n cn nt stay here 4 ever bt us poet ko pata to chalna nai hai k kon aya aur kon nai to phr jin say wada lay raha hai unko ticket laeni chahiye …..bai petrol hi itna menga ho gayya hai kharcha to hoga na!!! 😀

  20. zain said

    oho……….what happened………itni zalim wishes……
    kesa gusa hy…….

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